Dr. Sameh Abdallah gave a seminar for the College of
Language and Communications at the Arab Academy for Science, Technology, and
Maritime Transport in Miami. As the managing editor of the Al Ahram Newspaper –
Cairo Branch – the main message of his seminar was to give ten journalist tips
to the CLC students.
Throughout the seminar, Dr. Sameh Abdallah was able to
successfully deliver his main message. As a successful journalist, his advice
really did leave an impact, however his delivery was successful in grabbing the
audience’s attention at the start of his talk, throughout, and at the end. I
believe a reason for his success in grabbing attention was his volume, and the
interaction with the audience. He did resort to joking though the seminar,
which was good for his target audience – college students. However a majority
of the audience was made up of term 1 students, and I believe that is why he
resorted to taking a more friendly approach. As term 1 students, a majority of
them still have yet to think of their future. I would have preferred for him to
be a bit more serious regarding the explanation of some specific points. There
were times where I felt like I just wanted him to get to the point of his story
then continue his joking around with the audience. I personally was impacted
greatly by his talk. It was nice to see a man of his position with his
personality. I have been told various times that I am “too weird” and need to
change to be able to “deal with the country” so it was comforting to see a
successful, grown man acting care free while still being on top of his work.
That is what I aspire to be one day, successful while still being true to
myself.
The way that he started his speech was different than the
way that previous speakers have at our University. Instead of staying behind
the podium, seated, he stood up and stood in front of the podium. He was loud
and friendly with the way he started, making him stand out from the previous
people who have come to talk to us about their professions. His outro was
completely different from his intro. While his intro was friendly and inviting,
his outro was more serious which I believe was better than his intro because it
left the sense of how important the field of journalism is. I do believe that
the reason for the effectiveness of his outro was due to how friendly and
carefree his intro was.
While he spoke, the he used a mix of Arabic and English. His
language in both languages were formal enough to not be slang and also simple
enough to be understood at a friendly level of normal conversation. He did use a few expressions and phrases
regarding his tips for journalism. The use of expressions made it easy for the
tips to be remembered; furthermore, the expressions also made journalism seem
like a fun and interesting field that would be nice to join.
I loved his body language at the beginning of his speech
because he was standing and involved in what he was saying. The passion was
extremely noticeable, and it made the entire topic seem much more interesting.
However his excessive movements were somewhat distracting. I found myself
paying more attention to what he was doing and less attention to what he was
saying. His facial expressions were extremely energetic, but at points when he
was raising his voice his eyes would be open very widely and the entire issue
flipped from being friendly to somewhat intense. His volume was very loud,
which was good regarding the size of the room and the amount of people. I was
sitting in the third row, and at points I felt like he was yelling. His volume
would rise unexpectedly and it would startle me at some points, which would
distort my thoughts. I had a hard time following what he was saying when he was
yelling due to the excessive loudness. Other than that, it was fine, especially
considering the fact that his audience was mainly composed of first year
college students. I personally am not used to people speaking that loudly in
general, but I have noticed hat people in Egypt are used to speaking at high
volumes, so maybe it was perfect for the audience before him. His intonation
was very precise in both Arabic and English.
As for a visual aid, he had a presentation made up of 10
slides. Each slide only had the tip that he was explaining. The tip was written
in a creative way that made the presentation itself eye catching.
Dr. Sameh Abdallah did not depend on his visual aid to give
his talk. He read the tip on the slide, drawing attention to the visual aid,
and then he explained it in more detail without referring to any notes. He only
referred back to the visual aid when he wanted to emphasize the tip again
throughout his explanation.
Not a lot of people asked questions; however, he did answer
every question asked. I believe that part of the reason why not a lot of
questions were asked is because of the fact that some of the students were
scared from how he interacted with them. He was rather forceful and insensitive
while dealing with shy students.
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